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• Project 1 revision

  Wed Apr 11, 2007
  • i like the begining but in the first line i think that you can disregard the word the and just start out with the word feminists. the rest of the paper was written pretty well.

• Project 3

  Tue Mar 20, 2007
  • i liked the way that you opened your paper but i do think that the first few lines do run on a bit. other than that the opening paragraph was preety good.

• project 2

  Wed Feb 21, 2007
  • i think that you should put a sentence in at the top that describes what the paper will be about like stating that it is about analyzing and critiquing two articles. you did a very good job describing the argument of shakespeare and the drugs he used.

• Can medicine really prevent a person from aging?

  Sat Apr 7, 2007
  • death is just a natural part of life and no matter what everyone is going to die. all these people are doing is trying to delay the inevitable.

• What is a Virgin?

  Sat Apr 7, 2007
  • yeah i have heard of these born again virgins and have not really ubderstood what that meant because my thoughts were that once you lost your virginity then you can never get that back.

• Legalizing Opium?

  Sat Apr 7, 2007
  • i don't know if that is the best idea because with the legalization of it then there will be a huge increase in the amount just floating around out there because those farmers aren't going to have to worry about getting their crop destroyed anymore.

• Bags for Preemies?

  Sat Apr 7, 2007
  • that is very interesting that they could throw these little babies into vinyl bags to keep the babies healthy and prtected from certain illnesses. so jugding from this article i guess that wraping the in blankets just does not do enough to keep the infants warm.

• Upside down and all around

  Sat Mar 3, 2007
  • that is a pretty cool idea for a poem. to have it printed from the last verse to the first verse, but when it is read the bottom becomes the top and vice versa. while it is still the same poem it is understood differently because of the way that it is printed on the paper.

• ...a Force of Unparalleled Power!!!

  Thu Mar 1, 2007
  • and just look at where that invention has gone. the television is now in just bout every home across the country. it is the central medium through which many of us gather information on current events around the world and it is themain source of entertainment for many as well.